Posts Tagged ‘headline’

Most-Improved CW Nevius Headline of the Month – Original: “Crime Plagues Several San Francisco Neighborhoods”

Tuesday, November 15th, 2011

Now, how could you improve the headline for this bit?

I mean, really, Nevius? How about, instead, “Crime Plagues All San Francisco Neighborhoods?”

How about that?

Oh, here we go, IRL, version 2:

Much better.

(When will our Charles Marlow venture up-river again?)

Halloween Edition of the Marina Times: Bros, High-Fives, Charlie Sheen Costume, Passed-Out Sorority Girl, Fuss

Monday, October 31st, 2011

The NIMBYish Marina Times newspaper, via The Tens:

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But IRL, Halloween in the Marina District actually looks like more like this.

Are You There, Examiner? It’s Me, Margaret – Today’s “Sue LA! Sue LA!” Bryan Stow Graphic is Inappropriate

Wednesday, May 25th, 2011

I could explicate if you wanted me to.

The San Francisco Examiner, May 25, 2011:

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I realize you’re a tabloid, but even so…